[請益] 考試作文練習求指教

版友們好，由於沒有老師可以請益，單純自讀練習作文，所以來版上尋求各位協助，希望各位可以多多指教，謝謝。 本篇題目出自112年高醫後西醫英文試題 https://i.imgur.com/5px8Ke1.jpg 我的想法是寫優缺點分析， 第一段寫Chat GPT具有優點及缺點呼應題目， 第二段寫優點並且呼應題目smarter 第三段寫缺點，並且距離說明呼應題目dumber 第四段總結，並且帶出題目所說的監督 以下全文： All around the world, more and more people start to use artificial intelligence to assist their work, including doctors in the hospital. Chat GPT, one of the most fomous AI service, while providing several advantages, is not without drawbacks, and thus must be handled with extreme caution. With unlimited calculation ability, Chat GPT as a life saver can make contributions in several way, The fist beneficiary is those patients with acute pain syndrome. Chat GPT can take advantage as a computer, to think thousands times faster then human does, and capable of deciding treatment plan just in a bink of an eye. Moreover, Chat GPT is able to evaluate all the possibility from limited signs and symptoms, which doctors may oversight. Finally, Chat GPT being an application software loaded in a computer, can easily connect to other medical equipment,so that it is able to evaluate the data which acquire from device like MRI, EKG, EMG,etc. By comparing these data to those in the cloud, Chat GPT can determine if a patient is sick without a doctor. Chat GPT, nevertheless, does have some defect to be improved. First of all, Chat GPT is a new technique, therefore people might have concern about the correctness; what if Chat GPT gave a wrong answer, like misdiagnosis kidney cancer to herniated intervertebral discs. Beside from the accuracy of Chat GPT, sometimes, what patients need may not be merely doctor's treatmert. Instead, patient also need companionship from an actual human. In short, Cat GPT maybe useful in hospital, not only it can help doctors to analize patients' condition, also improve the efficiency in the hospital. On the other hand, Chat GPT would never be independent. Every diagnosis and treatment gain from it should always be monitored and supervised by doctors so that doctors can provide patients with a flawless medical service. 謝謝各位給予回饋！ ----- Sent from JPTT on my iPhone -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 114.45.76.226 (臺灣) ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1693383789.A.A52.html